Activity 6.1 - On the front foot

3 - Suggested answers

 

Strengths

Improvements?

It highlights the importance of this kind of research.

The research paper has specific, potentially important, findings that are worthy of mentioning in the press release

It contextualises and highlights some of the challenges of the field.

The press release makes suggestions for how the researchers’ work might result in a fairer situation for the region, but could be more specific

It highlights the impact that water science can have, reminding readers how many people rely on the Nile.

The press release has a lot of technical details that could be explained more clearly